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The_Hyena_King, April 8th, 2016, 5:04 pm     Reply

Now that they're free to talk about magic, they might as well start the exposistion.
He should probably do that for Adrestia, unless he already tried that offscreen...

Looks like it worked out for everyone so far (Except whoever died the first time Cross tried removing a collar, of course), let's see how long it takes to go downhill.

Catsassin (Guest), April 8th, 2016, 7:03 pm     Reply

I'm concerned for Asia. Considering that the collars sense intent and she now knows what Cross reaching for hers will do, could inaction be construed as intent to remove it?

ChibiSilverWings, April 8th, 2016, 8:00 pm     Reply

@Catsassin: He got them at the same time, It's kind of a fast mention but it's in the last sentence of the first paragraph of the update. I was gonna let you know specifically (since you were one of the few people who saw this page put up before we took it back down and I fixed that part of the script and you commented) I apologize about that. Basically I've been doing rewrites and that was one of the things I had fiddled with a few times trying to get it to work.

So tldr, Asia is collar free and safe and I suck at writing clearly.

Catsassin (Guest), April 8th, 2016, 10:20 pm     Reply

@ChibiSilverWings: Ah. I was just lurking at the time, and hadn't thought much of the removal/reupload, so I just dumped a more concise version of my original comment. I didn't even do a reread (not thinking there may have been a change) because this was one of the few times I felt like there was something important to say no one had said.

tldr: I panicked; I posted; I feel silly. We all make mistakes. Mine was action before thought, this time round.