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Guest, March 15th, 2014, 11:13 am     Reply


He's giving them a slow-acting love potion to build a harem XD

Lunaroki, March 15th, 2014, 11:22 am     Reply


In the eleventh/last frame, Billy says "Don't think I haven't noticed how much you offers us tea?" The sentence parses strangely anyway, but the word "offers" should be "offer" to agree with "you".

D3c3nd4n7, March 15th, 2014, 12:55 pm     Reply


@Lunaroki: Don't think I haven't noticed how much tea you offer us.

D3c3nd4n7, March 15th, 2014, 1:04 pm     Reply


Awww shame Tyler looks so betrayed..

Lunaroki, March 15th, 2014, 1:34 pm     Reply


@D3c3nd4n7: That's how I read it, but then the question mark at the end confounds that reading of the sentence. It's almost as though he's asking "Didn't think I noticed how much tea you offer us?" The way the sentence is written, it's as though it starts out as a declarative statement, but ends up as a question instead, as though he changed his mind about how he was conveying the thought mid-sentence.

ChibiSilverWings (Guest), March 15th, 2014, 2:05 pm     Reply


@Lunaroki: It was supposed to be an interrobang at the end, I must have accidently deleted it in one of the edits. So yes, Craig please shift that to "offer" and "?!"

D3c3nd4n7, March 15th, 2014, 2:11 pm     Reply


@Lunaroki: Ja the question mark is a bit out of place, the sentence works better as a statement.

ChibiSilverWings (Guest), March 15th, 2014, 2:19 pm     Reply


@D3c3nd4n7: come to think of it maybe just an exclaimation point. You guys caught this one, my bad. It was an error in between the second draft and final edit, there were several lines I cut from there, originally Billy was asking one of the others, "Have you not noticed how much he offers us tea?!" Which explains the "offers" and the question mark. Sorry all!

Lunaroki, March 15th, 2014, 2:47 pm     Reply


@ChibiSilverWings: That's okay! We know you guys work hard to make this comic the best it can be. Sometimes things just slip through. That's why we're here to catch these occasional hiccups. We love this comic, and we love you all for bringing it to us. Keep up the great work! ^_^

D3c3nd4n7, March 15th, 2014, 2:49 pm     Reply


@ChibiSilverWings: ja no prob u got wedding stuff to do, we'll help spot the stuff for you ^^

Don Quixotes, March 16th, 2014, 12:32 am     Reply


My guess is the 'tea' is some kind magic stimulant, like coffee except only for mages.

D3c3nd4n7, March 16th, 2014, 12:42 am     Reply


@Don Quixotes: He put a Mana potion in the tea D:

Profpatsch, March 16th, 2014, 2:15 pm     Reply


@D3c3nd4n7 That could be very well the case.

burningtyger, March 20th, 2014, 4:29 pm     Reply


@D3c3nd4n7:Such as "Everyone's eyes, turned to him." Also "followed in suit" instead of "followed suit."
@ChibiSilverWings: How about "Damn right. I have no reason to lie, whereas you do. Haven't you guys noticed how much tea he offers us?" He'd go from addressing Amical alone to the entire company in an instant.
Better, "And without prompting; I'm so proud and impressed!"