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Profpatsch, October 26th, 2013, 6:37 am     Reply

This
is getting good.

I like how she’s kind of forgetting the situation that brought her here and starting to live in the moment.

PrimroseFrost, October 26th, 2013, 10:04 am     Reply


As much as I hate to say it, I'm with Amical here. What would happen if Adrestia found herself in over her head, and needed to tell someone else about it? "That bleedy thing is looking pretty bad" is not particularly useful at that point. The idea is to study and figure out how it relates to what she already knows. </over-thinking>

Don Quixotes, October 26th, 2013, 11:14 pm     Reply


Adrestia's last speech bubble is kind of one big typo.
"I just don't know" should be "Just because I don't know" and it should all end with a "how".

AlmostAware, October 27th, 2013, 5:50 pm     Reply


@Don Quixotes: Could instead be fixed by adding punctuation: "I've got enough experience with wounds to know things. I just don't know all the technical names. Doesn't mean I don't know."

Sounds like something someone would say to me. Especially someone a bit offended.

burningtyger, October 27th, 2013, 7:55 pm     Reply


@AlmostAware: That's how I read it to- perfectly sensible, if not entirely grammatical. Frankly a simple semicolon would fix it.
"I just don't know all the technical names; doesn't mean I don't know!